Sunday, April 22, 2007
supplementary task 3 (changes of the conch)
the conch was found and it was decided that you have to have the conch to speak and wherever the conch was there would be a meeting. throughtout the book the conch changes, the boys decide not to use the conch for its uses anymore and no one cared about it anymore, they just forgot about the conch as if it was never even there.
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nice work. but you had some grammer mistakes. fix them please.
The conch was found and it was decided that one should to have the conch to speak. All he meeting would take place Where the conch was.Throughtout the book, the conch changed. The boys didn't really cared about it anymore and wouldn't take it too seriously. They would talk out of turn and couldn't see the use anymore. They just forgot about the conch as if it was never there.
if you used this as the finished, it would be a little better.
Thank you
This is well done Bashir, but I had trouble a little about the things you meant in your connection. You obviously did not proof read because there are a lot of grammer mistakes that I observed. Please fix them.
Hey guys, just for the record, it's spelt grammar not grammer.
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